zovikova

I have read this before and i thought you were copying by someone else but turns out you are rewriting..I am sure that it was just 20 chps that were released but they were really good so I expect a lot from this rewrite and I already see many changes you have made and they are great

the pacing feels a bit uneven, and some scenes could use a bit more description to really capture the mood. There are a few grammar issues here and there, but overall, it's an okay read. If you like Wanda, it's worth checking out to see if it picks up in later chapters.