Shhmoneyboggie

It's good but they're some grammatical errors actually like "it" instead of "eat" Also you keep switching between present and past tense. And maybe just do a general cross check before posting Solid💜

I love Melissa I love the name I love her personality I love the characters I love the contrast between the twin girls amazing Amazing 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

Navi from the avatar? Very very good I'm intrigued all your books are amazing Did you stop writing luna's eclipse?? You haven't updated it in a while

Stunning Good job Please update faster Chapter 1 was kinda shorter than a normal chapter but that was a great way to kick off the story I thought Carmilla was just a barbie girl but she's actually bad ass Lucian mmm we'll see