Daniel_Obeso

Great chapter

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It’s one of the better stories I’ve read in recent times and has a unique plot and writing that make it really stand apart from stories I’ve read. It’s fun, intriguing, and really has kept my attention throughout the 10 chapters that are out so far, I am very excited for what’s to come. Cheers man 🍻.

Rhaenyra's image as entitled and careless results mostly from her incapacity to accept or grow from her mistakes, therefore alienating possible friends. A better version of her may balance ambition with responsibility by exhibiting humility and a readiness to learn, therefore preserving her legitimate claim. Through wise choices—such as giving diplomacy first priority over pride—she may win acceptance and prevent needless confrontation. This strategy would enable her to develop into a queen who commands authority rather than only asserts it. A Rhaenyra who grows from error could turn her tragedy into success. Let me know if this makes a case at all, but I felt like I had to try💀

I’d say that there are 3 good options to go for with this story, in no particular order, 1. Rhaenys would be a different one as she isn’t commonly used and would be a unique scenario in how it all plays together, 2. The OC would be cool as having another dragon rider family in this story could be interesting and I haven’t seen it done as much, and finally 3. Rhaenyra would be one that isn’t as uncommon but could work as her character could find him as a more intriguing person to get into, along with the fact that they would be around the same age and give the MC a way to make a big appearance when his heritage is found out. All choices could be great as this story has me waiting for more, can’t wait for what you have in store for us readers.

I like the energy that you are giving off, I’m here for the long haul and am putting my faith that this is the beginning of great things to come for you.

Great chapter, will Rhaenys escape her marriage? I wonder. Keep up the great work

Your story about Torrhen is quite engaging; it would be a loss for it to stop before we know where his trip leads. Although the fanfic keeps at a slower pace, I totally appreciate your urge to concentrate on original projects but I also think there is space for both. Your writing, both original and fanfic, needs to be shared with the world; I will keep sharing the word about it!

Congratulation on completing your graduate degree first of all. Your work has always had a great depth and a distinctive style; every chapter clearly shows your passion of narrative. Your gripping account of Torrhen skillfully combines your personal vision with the complexity of A Song of Ice and Fire to enthralls readers. Fans of the narrative would really be losing something if it were ending early. Having said that, I totally appreciate your wish to concentrate on unique ideas and pursue a career as a writer—your talent is indisputable and it makes logical to spend time producing something entirely yours. Still, I believe the universe you have created with Torrhen has a great lot of promise. Though it's at a slower pace, many of us are excited to see where his path leads next and I really believe there is a balance that could be achieved between your original work and continuing the fanfiction. I will keep forwarding your original writings and fanfiction as well as sharing your work. Keep on; your potential as a writer is rather wonderful!

I must admit that this story captured my attention right away. I had the impression that I was right there with the characters, going through all they went through because of how vivid and compelling the writing is. I found the plot to be both engaging and thoughtful, with unexpected turns that made me want to keep reading. I was engrossed and curious to see what would happen next. It's one of those stories that sticks with you long after you've finished a chapter, so I really can't wait to read more.