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Sun_eater4 months agoAntwortet auf Gilly1210yeah, thanks for alerting me
Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen.- Sun_eater4 months agoAntwortet auf a_Reapp
Yes, I will also add a little to this chapter as well
- Sun_eater5 months agoAntwortet auf Sun_eater
Nope, all the fmcs fall completely fall for the mc. "yuri" is no longer an element past the chapter with Heide and Babel.
- Sun_eater5 months agoAntwortet auf a_Reapp
not contracted yet so I can't do that
- Sun_eater5 months agoAntwortet auf ItBeLikeThat
I'm writing another novel, sometimes I mix up the names, thank you for drawing my attention to it
Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen. - Sun_eater5 months agoVerschickt
Some grammar issues are present, still it's wierldly of very high quality. Quite a good read. ........................................... ...............
- Sun_eater5 months agoVerschickt
Well I personally think it's a five star. I get that the background at the beginning is a bit long but it's barely a quarter of the chapter so I'd love it if you could just bear with me. Really happy to be here! I hope you'll have as much fun reading it as I do while writing it
- Sun_eater5 months agoVerschickt
Definitely not my usual but it is a nice change of pace. A Very interesting story. Hope author doesn't drop it. More plssssssssssssssssssssss
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