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imagine him doing it and shouting something like,"I'm free!!!"

thank you for the chapter

I am re reading to get better understanding of novel, and to give more comments, so, tftc

tftc

A very unique concept, that I havent seen done yet and this story is nice from what ive seen and well thought out, not explaining everything but rather letting the mysteries unfold, I like oy

The book is free, and the writer takes in account many thing like the athor of the story this is based on, This story doesnt feel like a self insert, or a not so thought out, steamroller story where the character takes down everything, I feel like I am reading an official shadowslave side story or alternate, and not a harem wishfulfillment, which i am grateful for, this author has actually thought before he writes and put effort to not just tell and explain everything once something happens, but lets the story unfold The main character is amazingly written, as in its not some strength obsessed,power hungry, total apathetic person who only cares about level ups, instead the main character is written as it should be, a person, like you and me, I am loving this story and is the only one i having dropped on this sjte when it comes to fanfictions, because as I stated earlier, this is an actual novel that has thought,planning, and care put into it, I recomend reading this Sorry for the long review

Its sad, but a very good flaw, as it does its job, as a flaw. Also this means his sisters already forgetten about him right, like she may know she has a brother, but remember nothing other than that, or has forgotten entirely, which is sad, its nice you made a character with actual weaknesses and shortcomings, unlike many steamroller stories