Andrew_8401

I will say from the start that I personally like this story. The story gives off the ORV vibe but if you read it you will realise that it actually goes in a different direction and I congratulate the author for that. The characters are depicted good in the story giving unique personality to all of them as well as the world building. Overall the story is interesting and I hope others will find it as well. As for improvements, they will come with writing experience so I'll let the author find and improve what he thinks it can be improved