dave_brown

dude stop with this shit a whole paragraph is too much. and get rid of the "_"'s they make listening to the books annoying.

she formed a dog underneath her?

the chefs are already in 10

should have just ended it

lmao absolutely true way to end this chapter.

Good job Jake!

now that's better still don't care for aliya's situation but better.

Not sure how I feel about the past 2 twists honestly. I know you have a plan and I can kinda see where it's going. just not sure I care for the path it is taking.

See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

Now that's a twist. this is going to be fun!!!!