billy_pollock

Interesting start of the story I can’t wait to see what will come of this book

Interesting start of the story I can’t wait to see what will come of this book

Interesting start of the story I can’t wait to see what will come of this book

Interesting start of the story I can’t wait to see what will come of this book

Interesting start to the book I can’t wait to read more of what might happen in the future

Great story can’t wait to read more and see what happens next

I love this story keep up the great work

Great take on a system with a drawback unlike normal systems that just make you op. I can’t wait to see how this story goes.

A very interesting story I can’t wait to see where you take it.

Great concept for a story I can’t wait to see where you go with it. Great job