Chreecy_Kayra

I'm really not a fan of Isekai, other than watching it on anime or reading its manga this is the second time reading it as a novel. as a new author myself I know how hard it is for a new author, your novel has a lot of potential I can't wait to see your story progress and your growth as a writer too. try to read Rekishi: beyond the timestream by allunios, it's an isekai too, I know you will learn a lot from him too.

well written chapter, the pace is perfect, the character are developing nicely. everything is balanced.

oh this is good, this is my second time reading a romance novel but you have won my heart, i love the way you paced your story, key details don't feel like they are forced to the story, you give more details by giving less at the same time to keep me hooked. i love it

thank you so much for showing your love to my story. please keep reading and if you have some suggestions i would really love to hear them. after all readers always knows the story better than the author.

I've read and watch many isekai before and this truly deserve manga adaptation. the characters name and description are so vivid a lovable. i just love the way you've introduced your story and the way you gave your mc a solid background. most authors like to transport people to other worlds with even considering how the family of the mc would react but if your mc is an orphan, it automatically answers all those questions i would have.

thanks a lot for the reminder, i'm planning on revising the first 30 chapters, as its my first time writing a novel, so i keep learning about new things as i write.

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thank you so much. this is my first time writing a story, there more i learn about writing, the more i see the need to revise my story. I have been focusing on improving my writing and monitor how it do the readers react to the story. if you have any suggestions please feel free to state them. thanks again for your encouragement.

this is great, its unique but more importantly it has a way to keep you hooked, each and every chapters says read more. keep up the great work.