eroskun

I don't know what you commented cuz it says comment deleted, but I can only say that I agree. This peter in this fanfic is not how a real peter would be.

It didn't affect him. Yes he would stare at her and steal some gazes from time to time but he would not get depressed or something like that If anything, Peter parker's selfless nature is what truly bothers me

Thank you for saving me from wasting my time

I think lifespan should be more flexible. Qi refining 1 Vs Qi refining 9 shouldn't have the same 120 lifespan

While I appreciate the thought, sadly you didn't delivered. You said you wanted to add complexity and details but none of that was seen. He just tried and puff done, no otherworldly detailed process. Something that anyone, at least I'd like to think, who read the manga or watched the anime, and were to be isekai'ed would at least try on their own since apparently it's not that hard. (Vegeta mastered just by inferences, let alone someone with the readers knowledge). It just feels like the mc IQ is targeted. He should be smart, hell smarter most, given his past life and his now gained tuffle dna But other than that, it's better than some works out there. 👍

Why couldn't he learn qi sensing and manipulation on his own? He clearly knew everything roshi said, because it's exactly what he said in the manga/anime and the mc said himself he was a fan so he clearly remember it, there was no extra training needed and he master it just by trying. So author, I want to ask, why?

This mc is too childish for my taste. He was "excited" when he discovered he was isekai'ed to dragon ball as a SAIYAN, but he still wanted to live like a child and was "shocked and confused" when he was assigned a mission?

I didn't understand squad

I said you couldn't be more wrong lmao. First my username eroskun comes from EROS (greek god) and KUN (Japanese honorifc), second the profile picture is not Goku, it is vegeta you can easily find it on Google, and third i would never defend them 'just because they are women' dude I'm gay I thought the vegeta's naked as profile pic would make that clear, now tell me can a gay be a simp over some badly animated bitches? Dude you just hate without reason

You couldn't be more wrong lmao. First my username eroskun comes from EROS (greek god) and KUN (Japanese honorifc), second the profile picture is not Goku, it is vegeta you can easily find it on Google, and third i would never defend them 'just because they are women' dude I'm gay I thought the vegeta's naked as profile pic would make that clear, now tell me can a gay be a simp over some badly animated bitches? Dude you just hate without reason