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Shield calling it "SCP" rather than the previous chapters of calling it "Object"(Ex: Object-3199) is kind of a big plothole, since they're not supposed to know what "SCP" even means. Except that, Thanks for the chapter, nice seeing the story progressing(kinda).
Why is Shield calling it "SCP"? Isn't it supposed to be called "Object" rather than actually calling it "SCP", since they're not supposed to know what an "S.C.P." even is? Previous chapters called it "Object" or even just the number, letting them calling it SCP implies that Shield knows the foundation or atleast the meaning of what an SCP even is. This is a kind of a big plothole, and I think you should fix this while the chapter is still newly released(even if there like 10 advanced chapters), if it's not fixed sooner this is gonna snowball into something unfixable, I think.
Putting Izuku in this sentence would have made much more sense. All Might wouldn't have known, sure MC said he recently got it but becauee All Might saw his punch, AM would naturally think MC got his quirk like a few days or weekss before the event.
No way he unironically uses chat, right?💀
There's something ironic and hilarious that "Dumb" of all things is mispelled.
Mr. Narrator sounds like he just speaks the first word that comes to mind or is the type of person to speak before thinking lol
Ah yes, Detroid. My favorite state.
If he isn't more Gilgamesh than himself, then what are we even here for? lol
Ayo? 😳❓️
Just wanna say this again for everyone. Foreshadowing and building upon what's established is not the same. Like how it's mentioned that "[Blank] is/does [Blank²]" and "[Blank²] is just somewhere in [Blank³], and then later on that stuff is shown to do just that. That doesn't really sound like foreshadowing, rather, it's just building on what is already shown/said. Foreshadowing is more like(to me) two separate stuff(or anything not so obvious) that, when mentioned, doesn't really sound like it is related but then you find out later on that is looks so obvious you'd think you were dumb not finding it out sooner. For example, one character says "[Blank] is at the [Blank²]" and another, a few chapters later on, would say "Did you know [Blank²] is the domain/owner/whatever of [Blank³]?".
"...D-Class Personnel he could test out his power on"*
Ah yes, the beginning of something great.
Seriously? This could have been something like, The MC thinks that maybe he could get more points by changing the plot and then with him doing so and it shows his theory to be correct. Y'know show his genius at theory, even if he wasn't OG Jareth, it would show that MC would still be a little smart, right?
This afterwords are getting annoying tbh. You don't really have to explain every single action, or atleast not directly. Like saying the lion got afraid because it felt power and leave it at that, rather than adding it got afraid because of the card. Kinda immersion breaking imo.
Calm yourself boy 💀
This anchor is really gassing him up 😭
Since his strength has been shown. The only real reason he could be fired is because of his attitude, but that can be overlooked honestly. I wonder what he'll say 🤔
Welp nvm then. Though why did he still get fired though? "Because he's weaker than a first-year"? The principle seems to already know that. Is thw problem about the amount of people who know? Then why not spread that info?
??? I'm surprised they didn't use this to get him fired earlier. For a family of mages isn't time important? So why not get rid of him earlier than when she started going to school like a year or more earlier.