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See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

It's the second webnovel I read from I_Cook and its work of art once again. It's really easy to immerse yourself while reading; language and vocabulary used are superb, grammar is on point without mistakes and story just flow. Pacing is stable throughout the chapters so far (up to 141), no plot holes or too obvious plot armor and yeah ofc mc got good stuff, skills etc- look at the tags, he is supposed to be strong and op. I like that romance just happend without NTR or some young master lusting over fml for over 40 chapters like in other novels- it's adorable and hits that sweet spot you are craving from romance tag. (possible spoiler- FML is NOT useless ! and is NOT ice user xD) Chemistry between characters is great, dialogues allow to easily differentiate different people talking, with each of them having their own quriks etc; moreover it's not just dialogues, each character feels like real 3d living being and not 2d background character. If I were to point something out then it would be long descriptions to skills, items and whatnot taking a lot of word count, but it's matter of personal preference- some may skip it, some may like it. Personally I like reading these effects, my only worry would be power scaling xD But i strongly believe author will provide and story will continue to slap.

I like the novel so far but land and map scale got me trippin balls. It was said that this world is 1 continent and is 100 times bigger than Earth and this mf in matter of minutes (or maybe even hours, doesn't matter) travelled through whole Wailing Woods and Death Mountains. My commute to school is longer and I'm using a car xD

epic name moment

just you wait for my book (work in progress), MC will have the trait 'knight' or even 'baron' (kinda worried about power-scaling if I were to start with a baron right of the bat)

-Passive Skill of 4th Order (locked): You can touch yourself now Conditions to unlock: Let yourself be touched by an old man