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Even the system is already in shock from his brain brakes.
In this work we can observe a high level of character development, realistic dialogue and an exciting plot. The author writes interestingly, but so far the detail of the world is poorly visible. This is not a significant problem, since a more detailed description could make reading boring, so it is perceived as normal. Especially considering that common features can be traced in the world and as the plot unfolds, we will learn more and more. This should be praised. Of the cons that catch your eye, you can only highlight the lack of stability in the release of chapters. Try your best Author-kun, your story is wonderful!