R.I.P Rin Nohara
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And less greedy, I would agree. Hiruzen has an amazing leading ability but uses it for greed and to hide his cowardice.
that sounds disgusting.
I think it's better otherwise it would be more suspicious. But at the same time it just an upgrade of the sharingan's copying.
why did I see this coming?
Who?
I mean no disrespect in this review. I'll start with the brightest point, the author has good grammar and puts in effort. Now the dark spots, I assume the author does not do his research of the timeline. I only read around 10-15 chapters, but he has things that shouldn't be there; Ninja ranks were later invented by Tobirama after the villages were founded. I may be wrong, feel free to correct me.
Ninja ranks didn't exist at that time.
It's cool. I honestly don't even remember the last time I was mad.
Mad? I'm just wondering about his train of thought. I just can't fathom how he didn't know it was genderbend with the context clues.
Yes and this is webnovel so... What's your point?