Funny_Gamer_3397

Tftc

But man we waited so long for 3 chapters. Can you tell us your update schedule so I can know when to expect your new update?

He's back. The menace is back!!!

I am getting ahead of myself but author it would be a masterful touch if, later in the story, you allow a meeting between this fic's Adam and the Adam of the fic before the rewrite. Showing the difference between the state of Adam before the rewrite when he was reckless with his actions and this fic's Adam would be amazing to watch and wouldn't waste your previous efforts. It could be a meeting between 2 parallel worlds or more depending on how you want to do this. It could make for a good plot point at the end of your fic.

Thanos* not thanks

Worthy of being Tony stark. The man advanced his AI so much, grasping the entire Internet in the palm of his hands (equivalent to ultron level of manipulation). BUUUT this is very early in the storyline otherwise it wouldn't have this easy especially after the chitari invasion when villains have access to alien technology. I can't wait to see more of the story and see Tony deal with the mature slippery villains, Mr sinister, sublime, thanks, ....etc I wanted to ask about the setting of this story. Is it comic level strength or MCU?

Ikr. The open heaven stage I found strange when reading the original especially when they got stuck in their cultivation if they used inferior materials. They needed rare materials with highest being 10th grade attribute treasures to advance in realm. It is like their original cultivation isn't complete and they needed outside help to supplement their foundation. Although it is too soon to say this, the new cultivation system should rectify this and make a transitional realm between emperor and open heaven to fix this. This could actually be a subplot where mc sets to experiment with himself to advance into this new transitional realm.

Can't say I agree with you. I find this start better than the previous version and is going well.

Comprehension not compression

Man what a waste of enlightenment token.... should have used it when he got the black book so he can use it as reference material.... it is a cultivation book from at least a origin king cultivator demon who was once an open heaven realm (correct me if I am wrong) But that is not necessarily a bad thing you can add it as a form of character development for the mc when he gets the black book after his enlightenment and make him show his regret for it. Can add a bit of humanity to the mc which i find cool when authors do that. But maybe he doesn't need it.... since its enlightenment token reaching the peak of martial peaks reality then the mc would have the same compression level of a peak world creator realm who has control of all daos and then some..... So far I am still liking this start, though mc is sent by a somewhat troubling fellow, I am liking this mature thinking mc more