Jeet_1993
Its nice to meet you all. I am a noob writer but still writing for my passion. Please take care of me :)
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Jeet_19939minKommentiertCh 11 The First Words and Choices- Jeet_199313minKommentiert
oh so heart touching
On this particular day, after the excitement of the ceremony had died down, Queen Nayana spent some quiet time with Siddharth in the royal gardens. She talked to him about the flowers and butterflies, about the sky and the stars. And in one magical, unexpected moment, Siddharth looked up at her and babbled, "Ma." - Jeet_199314minKommentiert
dude describe what are they? non indians will get confused.
Dharmapal joined in, smiling warmly. "Or 'Nana'. Come on, Siddharth, you can do it." - Jeet_199315minKommentiert"Say 'Nani', Siddharth," Deddadevi encouraged, her face close to his. "Can you say 'Nani'?"
- Jeet_199323minKommentiert
I guess its those crazy kisses , painting cheeks with saliva.
After the ceremony, Nayana took Siddharth to his grandparents, Deddadevi and Dharmapal, who had been eagerly waiting to spend time with their grandson. The grandparents doted over the little prince, taking turns to hold him and showering him with blessings and affection. - Jeet_199325minKommentiert
ah nice, i think i have gone through this too. My granny used to say that at first I picked up a coin then took up a pen.
Though he couldn't remember or understand it, there was a sense of familiarity that drew him in. Eventually, his choice was clear; he picked up the book, holding it up for everyone to see. - Jeet_199331minKommentiertSix months had passed since Prince Siddharth's birth, and the palace was alive with preparations for an important milestone in his young life—the Annaprashana ceremony. This rite of passage marked the transition from infancy to toddlerhood, introducing the young prince to his first solid food.
- Jeet_199345minAntwortet auf Lobo2Abyssal
Thank you so much for this review. I guess it needs >=10, to get an actual book rating. Was stuck with no rating for so many days. Regarding my writing, I accept my shortcomings as I am still in the learning phase as an author and I apologize for any nuances. I promise to deliver better content ahead. :)
- Jeet_199358minAntwortet auf Robin_singh_9106
It feels very "nice" to see "nice" words as the first read in the morning. I am sorry as I missed the notification. Regarding the updates, I am out of stock and its challenging to write everyday as a working professional but I will come up with a fixed schedule soon. For now please keep an eye in morning, if you are in Indian/Asian time zone.
- Jeet_199320hAntwortet auf Lobo2Abyssal
alright i m gonna re- edit it .
Aditya paused, deciding to omit the concept of parallel universes as it might not translate well. - Jeet_19931dAntwortet auf Lobo2Abyssal
lies are not the solution of long term things. :)
Bowing his head, Aditya confessed, "You are correct, Majesty. I am not a commoner or a typical soldier of this era. Whether you believe me or not, the truth is I am not of this time." - Jeet_19933dKommentiert
he slept just like that? why i m feeling something amiss here.[img=disgusted]
When Siddharth cooed softly, Sonakshi smiled. With a soft touch of his curly hair, she said, "Little prince, sleep well. You are only getting started on this trip." - Jeet_19933dKommentiert
ok its like a checkpoint
As they worked, the system in Siddharth's head was gradually depleted. The successful birth depleted its reserves, so it launched a shutdown sequence. "Activating backup mode," the system said internally. "Sealing memory for 90,000 hours to facilitate recovery. "Reverting intelligence to its baseline." - Jeet_19935dKommentiertMap of Sur empire in 1556, which will eventually known as Samrajya.
- Jeet_19935dKommentiertCh 8 The Ambush
- Jeet_19935dKommentiert
ok so no prisoners..
With the garrison's help, the tide of the battle turned. The combined forces of the royal guards and the garrison pushed back the attackers, who fought fiercely but were ultimately overwhelmed. One by one, the attackers fell until none remained. - Jeet_19935dKommentiert
where is the ay, weren't they supposed to protect the queen. then entered so easily?
The attackers hesitated, taken aback by the sight of the armed queen. Nayana didn't give them a chance to recover. She fired the shotgun, the blast echoing in the confined space, taking down two attackers instantly. The recoil was powerful, but she handled it with practiced ease. - Jeet_19935dKommentiert
fought or thought?
The battle raged on, the sounds of combat filling the twilight. Vardhaman's mind raced as he fought, trying to gauge the strength and numbers of the enemy force. Among the attackers, he spotted a symbol resembling that of one of the elitist noble factions, along with the logo of a new heretical religion he had heard about.