
I like to write honest reviews, explaining why I like or dislike something. I usually watch 20 episodes before writing a review. If you like a show and want me to review it, let me know.
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I'll give you my review when I can. Even though I'm not a professional and don't know much, I'll try to analyze the good and bad points so you can improve as much as possible
100 chapters just to review a story, bro? Hahaha 20 or 30 is more than enough. If the author can't hook their audience by then, it's trash.
Hunting so many doesn't seem like a good idea to me. Maybe 5 or 6 would have been fine, but if he already has 12 this early, they're going to come back and bother him again.
Well, I guess he'll visit a library and feed him all the vital information like areas, Gu, Historical or powerful figures, sects etc.
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It's a fanfic, and if the author says there are 300 Hokages, then there are 300 Hokages, whether it makes sense or not
Okay, the AI presence was really noticeable in this chapter. You should probably review it and the previous one too, especially the parts with Gran Torino. For example, how did he know there were black sparks at the scene when it was explicitly stated that he only sensed the energy when he arrived? How on earth did he know the hit had to land in a millionth of a second? And there are other things that are inconsistent too.