Cody_Mohr

this is a very unique way to do a system I look forward to the continuation to see if not only the ox talisman but all the 12 talismans are gained

I look forward to continuation to see where this goes this has truly been one of the most interesting fanfics of The originals family I truly hope this continues

a suggestion for a bloodline would be Balthazar and elder version of Leo from charmed one is a demon and the other is a semi-god and he can also give his lovers power from there

a suggestion of a mission to Jackie Chan adventures to where the demons have taken over the world from the sorcerer demons to the Oni

I'm already on chapter 9 and I find this story most entertaining I hope this continues like the other one with the angel goddess

I see still hope the small plot that's in it is still interesting

the story seems interesting I look forward to seeing how it goes hopefully there will be more chapters

a marvelous start hopefully you continue along with the other stories

I really enjoy your book I look forward to the continuation and suggestion for the new world to go to I think Jackie Chan adventures would be a good choice for the talismans and with the archmage you can make more for his harem

I sincerely hope you continue this book to the very end or close to it and an idea for a world to go to charmed the original one to see what you could do with it just a suggestion