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It's good, sometimes author misplaced details and in first chapter everything was compiled into a paragraph, but later on it was easy to read with good spacing although story was good from the start, but author should slow his growth as at 15 years he's called best player of valencia, which seems bit too much unrealistic. but i like the story, hope author continues it 300+ chapters

just make it ivan, sounds cool

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System being honest

It's so good, I didn't expect at start to be this good. btw author, is mc having a system in future

Thanks for the ch! , Absolutely love your worrk, truly unique

Absolutely amazing book Writing is amazing storyline is amazing mc is amazing. A must read for football novels lover

thx for the ch