I had to review this novel for the sake of myself. Could there be things that could be improved upon? Yes. However the story in itself is engaging, the world building isn't too difficult to understand. The characters are 3d and not used for the sake of the plot.

No one should make that decision, even parents. it's best to inform to the best of one'e ability why not to do something because it didn't work for said person not to decide for a person and cut off a possible link for them to prosper

giving supreme magus vibes, wouldn't be surprised if this was Legion20 under another pseudonym