asparincris

Thanks! but due to some feedback I've decided to rewrite some few things and fix some of my mistakes

Thanks! I appreciate your rating and feedback!

Thanks for the rating I really appreciate it! Yes I'm slowly improving my writing and vocabulary and I don't want to always rely of gpt but I can't help it I lack in vocabulary and sometimes my grammar is wrong so I have to periodically rely on it

if I rate it myself I think it deserve this rating my writing is a little bit inconsistent, but I'm working on it and I'm pretty satisfied with my charactera