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jonas_karel

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2023-11-28 BeigetretenGlobal
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  • jonas_karel
    jonas_karel17h
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    wasn't Mercury the Roman equivalent of Hermes?

    I only gave him some pointers about where to invest, what areas to look into, and some of the future losses the market will face. This, coupled with my track record of only investing in projects in which I knew I would get a great return, had my uncle thinking I was the second coming of Mercury or something.
    Baki: Martial System
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    jonas_karel7d
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    thanks for the chapter this is one of my favourite fanfics

    Ch 98 Pijal City
    Predator of Star Wars: Hunt
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    jonas_karel8d
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    and Durins bane after Gandalf defeats him

    Narzug listened attentively and felt the excitement growing within him. He knew that this was the key to his ultimate power. But he also knew that he had to find the right creature to gain the greatest possible power.
    LOTR: I'm an Orc
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  • jonas_karel
    jonas_karel9d
    Antwortet auf Maximus_Duke

    for now he will still go by Sauron but eventually he will take on his old name

    Ch 3 back to middle earth
    Sauron in game of thrones
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  • jonas_karel
    jonas_karel19d
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    nah but in china you would be hanging for even thinking differently than the great communist pooh bear. let alone get your credit score would definitely be lowered they see everything over there

    As for whether he would be hung from a lamppost for this "conscience," Russell wasn't concerned at all. In the United States, where capital reigns, it's unrealistic to think a "conscience-filled" capitalist would be hanged.
    In the Marvel Universe as Wonder Woman's boyfriend
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  • jonas_karel
    jonas_karel21d
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    wait till he finds out that it is ten inches while soft

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    jonas_karel23d
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    what about his daughter? he was used as a sperm donor after all

    Ch 102 Chapter 102: A Visit to Duén Canell
    The Witcher: Lord of the Empire
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  • jonas_karel
    jonas_karel1mth
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    is it possible to include the names and description of some of the scp's when introducing them. it's hard to follow otherwise like with scp 1555 until this chapter I have no idea what it is haven't read through the full chapter yet but it would be much appreciated if a short summary would be added for every scp either new marvel ones or old ones

    Ch 11 Enter Bruce Banner. -10
    Marvel: The Foundation
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  • jonas_karel
    jonas_karel2mth
    Antwortet auf GloryOfTheDark

    thanks for all the input I have dislectia myself so these kinds of mistakes will probably keep on happening because I write it as I hear it so if you find another spelling mistake please point it out I will do my best to correct it.

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    A Spartan's galactic empire
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    jonas_karel2mth
    Antwortet auf GloryOfTheDark

    yeah that's my fault put down the word for baby in my mother language i will fix it

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    jonas_karel2mth
    Antwortet auf GloryOfTheDark

    yeah a friend of mine said the same. I tried to do it for the old chapters but it is possible I missed some I will go over them again tomorrow

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    A Spartan's galactic empire
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  • jonas_karel
    jonas_karel2mth
    Antwortet auf GloryOfTheDark

    thank you for the input you are right. i changed the storyline a bit concerning the nanobots so it is not important anymore i shall remove it

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    A Spartan's galactic empire
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  • jonas_karel
    jonas_karel2mth
    Antwortet auf MRsCat

    fixed the first chapter and cleaned it up a bit it would be great if you could let me know if it has improved going to do the same for the next 8 chapters

    Ch 6 a wicked king
    A Spartan's galactic empire
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  • jonas_karel
    jonas_karel2mth
    Antwortet auf MRsCat

    thank you for the input, I'm still new at this so i am trying to improve. I will see if I can make adjustments on the old chapters and please let me know if there are more points I can look at

    Ch 6 a wicked king
    A Spartan's galactic empire
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