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Got nothing to do. So write a chapter and publish it. No idea,then read some other novel.
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LLAZYREADER9hAntwortet auf ThePhoenixGodwhy? can i ask that?
When It All Changed- LLAZYREADER3dKommentiert"How do they look? Hunched with ugly faces? No, large with broad wings that spread out? I guess so," he thought while walking down the ghost-quiet street.
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I have advice for you my friend: use ‘....’ or anything else such as a bracket to write thoughts even though you are mentioning them. I think imo it would be good for you to separate thoughts and dialogue when you are revising.
"I think this is another world," he thought while standing upright and facing other individuals. - LLAZYREADER5dKommentiert
Void is black if i am not wrong
But in a matter of seconds, he was transported to a white void, that stretched endlessly. - LLAZYREADER5dKommentiertHe dipped his head into a bucket filled with water, and magically, his face had transformed to become better than ever.
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Is this fantasy world already or normal world?
It was still 6 in the morning, paving the way for Levi to ready himself and his materials for the exams. It was his only entrance into his first college. - LLAZYREADER5dKommentiert"Although it's been 7 years since I last saw them, I didn't receive any news of their death. There's still a chance that they're alive."
- LLAZYREADER5dKommentiertHe remembered his parents, although he desperately tried to forget each day.
- LLAZYREADER5dKommentiertAs usual, his alarm rang, preceding it were chimes of morning bells that always made him rise from bed joyfully.
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Yo lazy here
When It All Changed - LLAZYREADER5dAntwortet auf Ethos_"You never know what might happen in life." That was my father's motto.
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The so-called talent was merely but a mature and intellect soul that carried a few of Earth's popular ancient poems. - LLAZYREADER14dKommentiertJune looked around the hall to see if Jaeyong was looking at anyone else. However, he couldn't be mistaken. RAVEN's leader was looking right at him!
- LLAZYREADER19dAntwortet auf USER000
Yes check.
"Hey Akeshi where is your dad?" - LLAZYREADER19dKommentiert
Bro no need to censor this..I think?
THE DIMENSION OF S*#T#* *T#*##E - LLAZYREADER19dKommentiertQ) Can the words of the being who introduced himself, to our mc be trusted?
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I think this one went unexplained.
"Yes please, since the five times stronger version of me couldn't scratch you then what else I could do?" - LLAZYREADER19dKommentiertkill! kill! kill! kill! kill! kill! kill! kill! kill! kill! kill! kill! kill! Kill!—
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Also is it okay if I Point out some mistakes ? (genuinely asking
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Hello i am also an author or writer , whatever you call it. But i will try my best to sulpport you.(Like with comments and power stone. I don't have money to give gifts sorry.)
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