Lua_C
Lua C is an author who combines her love of sky and moon in enchanting narratives. Her words are like warm embraces made of letters, resouding in passionate novels and everyday life stories.
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Hi CosmicArchmage! Thank you very much for your review. I'm really glad you liked it. The life of a flight attendant is beautiful and challenging. Being responsible for keeping people safe is not an easy job, but fighting to protect lives is exciting and satisfying. It's a real mission! Thank you very much!
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Hi Author! The book's proposal is very good and has great potential! But I missed the involvement that the plot promises. Although the writing was okay, I couldn't feel the emotions that should have been conveyed in each scene. I know that no matter what happened, it would still be a haunting fate for Aurelia, but I think she should have fought a little harder, it would have brought more feeling to the narrative. "Even if it seems impossible...I should still fight for my life somehow, after all, this is my life..." These are some of my sincere thoughts. I hope I can give you a better evaluation next time!
Hi Author! The story reminds me a lot of Douluo, one of my favorites! I don't know, maybe that's why I felt it lacked a bit of emotion. But overall, it's obviously not bad! The idea of being reborn in a new world is always painful and interesting, at least in the aspect that was Einar's death. I advise you to revise the narrative of the facts, especially in the first chapter, it will have a better impact on the readers. It has a lot of potential!
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Painful and challenging! I had some feelings here...
Looks like we're getting to my area!
I like it!