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so Idk if you will read this but at the beginning of this chapter there is a spelling mistake like 1 paragraph in its blooldline there is an extra l it should be bloodline regardless of that this book is really good [img=update]

besides the aweful Grammer the story is really good it needs proofreading but other than that I have no complaints ( it's all minor stuff that if fixed will make the story flow better )

this book is really well done it has really good action in it cant wait for more

the best way to describe the difference between hunter amd survival instinct is one is used for Hunting and the other is used for survival

so good please make more chapters =)

I am enjoying this story alot [img=update]

I KNEW IT BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD SKULLS FOR THE SKULL THRONE they might be diffrent names but you can't hide the fact that it's warhammer <3

uh Apophis is the snake god of chaos in Egypt his name is also spelled Apep,Apepi or Aapep I love the story just got a little confused when you said Apophis was a god of the dead

just because this a a story about mages im gonna guess Emery is Merlin

he's considered post human due to his GENETIC MAKEUP not his abilities he technically is a post human his genes where altered