SirBobthe_1st

Ok so first off and this is interesting idea and has great potential and creativity. And here comes the but, but it’s a shitty ass novel good translation but the original work is just garbage for 3 reasons 1. It’s fucking as hell racist honestly what can you expect from a chinse man reincarnated into a German immigrant in the USA but even that it’s just plain retarded how bias the author is to China. 2. It’s character design/world logic is trash every character is flat and dull conversations is so simple. the author tries to keep tot he lore when he adds random shit like Disney it’s like he read that one German ww1 novel I think it’s called blood and iron idk but that’s the vibes I’m getting from it but a really shitty version. 3. It’s plot it’s so fucking slow not to mention the author is such a hypocrite with everything he says. In the end I can see where this is going and I like some of it but there are factors that just are repulsive for me to read a good story. And honestly I can take some racism it’s in every chinse fic or novel but at some point this just gets to a point of like wtf is happening it’s like it’s getting written but a chinse Pakistani Jews Japan like I’m not saying there good in anyway but wow. This is bad.

Give me a extra chapter please and thanks

Good idea and concept and the writing is pretty good from what you expect for a fanfic. Updating is top notch and the background is pretty interesting. My only huge problem with this is age, like man or women idk who reading this idc if there’s harem or romance but, you want to know how old they are if there all the same age as Harry Potter, 11 so sexualizing characters at that age is just wrong and messed go watch the 1st movie and just look. Oh and last thing author seems to repeat frazes and that kinda gets old

I have a question I see the harem tag I don’t usually like harem and but since this is in the Hxh I feel like there aren’t that many options so I want to read this can someone explain why this has harem and to what degree

Trash don’t waste your time. Good idea horrible writing. Inconsistent world rules. Inconsistent power levels. Bad plot.

Great nov I hope the author continues I see potential

This is not good. There are multiple problems but there are 3 that really stand out. First is the Mc is a horrible person and protagonist not only does his logic and morality not make any sense but he’s a asshole you can make a Mc a villain but he has no drive no soul. Second is the author holy shit is this guy stupid it’s as if he read starting as a class five mutant was like 👍 sounds nice and blatantly copied the premise then he goes into writing with no sense or past knowledge it’s as if all his knowledge of marvel is from fanfics honestly I would not be surprised if this is ai generated. But the worse part is the writing for example how does every person know what a omega mutant is and by the way gojo may be a class five mutant but he is not omega level by any standards, why did the Mc not just go to the big arc reactor instead of harassing tony and killing people in total the authors righting story telling and idea is copied. Third nothing makes sense in his marvel world not only do the characters seem flat as hell but so does the power system and everything else. The only good quality of this fanfic was the idea and title the only reason why I read this piece of shit

Could fic this perhaps be dropped? For reason unknown to me

Thank you very much

So everything really good but quick question what’s the updating status is this dropped or slow or break pls someone let me know