Lazy_Bitch13

What do you mean by fake OP? Original.Poster? Overpowered or something?

I don't think that's appropriate to tell in the public

wala ko kasabot. Like jerk man kaha si guy ngano mang in love lageg barog ni siya

I just read midway of chapter 2 and I dropped it real quick. That part where she thoughts that she has to come back to her original family because her 7 brothers will be big shot in the future and she can manipulate the real daughter family like a small bug. Like what kind of thoughts was this? First of all it's not her real family and she was so entitled to his 7 brothers achievement. It's their achievement and not yours.

Where are the paragraphs in all my comments? Is this a bug?

Chapter 98 review, I have to review in this part as I am thinking of dropping this book for reasons I will list after this.The book is good, at least with the standard in this site, this book is still above average. Here's my problem, It's the pacing of the story. I don't mind if the story likes to talk and made conversation and likes to accomplish a lot of scenes in a one day settings but at least made it more interesting. The story, at least for now, revolves into two romantic pairs, our main leads and the side casts. The side cast story was even more interesting than the main one but the author loves to interchange the chapters from this story to the other story from time to time, which makes the reading experience draggy. Like you are anticipating what will happen in the main story then the thrill will be cut off because the side story comes in. When I was also invested with the side story then the next chapter it'll turn into the main, you don't know how frustrating that is. There's a reason why books are usually has main cast where the story revolves instead of a lot. It's like reading different books at the same time, and there is a reason I don't do that, it's distracting and I like a linear story without interruption.Then came the characters, they're hypocrites. they are not perfect and I understand they were made like that to fleshed them out but that doesn't mean I like them. The ML just keeps piling up his lies without any guilt or apparent distress throughout and that shows character. He's manipulative, which is a red flag. If he can lie so much for his selfish needs to the one he likes even before they were in a relationship, then what about when they were in a relationship? Will he become honest? I doubt it because I think it's his nature. Then lets talk about the MC. I honestly don't know what's likeable of her. As a main character, she's pretty plain. I get tired reading her. She has no charm or anything admirable of her. I especially dislike how she can't own up to her own feelings. She's taciturn and wishy washy. She's not headstrong, she's not talented, not driven, she didn't even have motivation and goals. She has no aspirations and I honestly don't know what the ML saw on her. Why was she even the MC when her character is like an extra. She even has no hobby. She's boring and it's really hard to cheer for someone's love life when you don't care about her. I'm always questioning why the heck is the ML doing all of these things to this girl, what's so intriguing about her, please let us understand the author. I don't like that she's a hypocrite, can't own up on her feelings, and can't act up what she says she'll do.

is this the ending? I just jump through the ending because some people says it's incomplete.

It was good from the start and despit how it seems to be cliche it at least was done well, and still able to give more new and interesting contents than you usually get from this carbon copy books. I was genuinely enjoying the book but around chapter 61 onwards the translation just nosedive to the sea floor and it is sometimes not legible enough. I feel that it's still translated rather than the actual mtl but they just do it with no effort and care.

I'm in chapter 200 , and it did get better around 150s? with some new plots but it stagnated again. I sometimes find them overreacting and out of character. For a hundred chapters, there is so little development with the main leads. Like they just met at a business meeting and the MC got her period. There are so many filler chapters.

Miss/Mr. Author, just a suggestion with regards to slice of life stories. I've read a lot of them and they are my comfort books but yours seem to focus more on other characters' lives..The problem comes from how the more we go on with the story, the more you give more chapters and emphasis to these characters thus slowing down the story and giving less time to the main characters we already invested feelings with. I don't know about others but what I like about slice of life stories was the gradual growth and betterment of the main character as she/he lives everyday. Also, make it interesting. For example, a book about farming where the MC starts planting simple plants and then gradually evolved to rare plants and new variants of plants. There is excitement and growth in it. But yours seems stagnant with most of the time they are just having fun like eating dinner together or going on to dates. Honestly that's boring when it always happens. There is a lack of growth, yours though focuses more on emotional growth. Let's go back to my first point. Imagine a slice of life book about farming then after a hundred chapters, from a few chapters here and there will be chapters about the lives of other farmers. It's okay if they are interesting but if they were just talking about their daily lives, it would hardly be interesting especially if we're not still done with the MCs life.I really love your other books and I like that you hardly insert other characters chapters like in this book in those books but I'm really considering dropping this book but I don't want to because I have already fallen in love with the MC and ML. I am genuinely invested with how they are gonna grow and prosper.