ManiacReader1

why did you make him a pothead?

I really love this twilight fanfic. The mc is so cute, and her reactions are believable, a very well written story with excellent flow. I recommend reading before judging it.

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I liked the chapter a lot, thanks

it was really good, an awesome job of detailing what was happening durring the fight.

this version is so much better than the older defiant fanfiction, the grammar is really well written so I don't turn dumb trying to read it, like with most fanfics on this site, interesting powers as well, author makes the wishes actually work and blend into the world. please don't drop this it is a really good fanfiction

a very good story, written so well that you can actually feel the tension between the characters. at the start the mc drifter might seem like he is overshadowed my the kirito, but that really changes around chapter 30. very interesting with the livestream of the boss fights around the world. please don't drop this.

so good, the writing quality is really good, the character design and development is top notch, although similar to the fanfiction unyielding at the beginning but after the first floor it is complete original and is one of the best SAO fanfiction I have read.