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have you changed the synopsis synopsis 🤔? Because now this question becomes invalid to ask😞
then why Don't you just answer😁
romance?
True review till chapter 23 : (1). MC is chatterbox who will keep speaking useless things till the chapter ends without any true progress. (2). useless fights between other characters 😐 when we don't even know what is the power of MC. (3). when you see the title it gives a feeling that maybe MC some OP character in his novel or carry a strong power but the reality is just as bad 😞. I think author should mainly focus on the MC instead of other characters because it doesn't matter how strong they are if MC is a weak dog(female).
19 chapter and no useful information, heck there is not even a single element to keep a reader connected, you keep stretching the story, we understand your love for guns like a famous novel but try to understand even that protagonist have something special to stand out which is shown in the beginning.
if possible don't make him undead skeleton because it does not appear good for the long run of a novel any other being like vampire, dragon etc are good or you should try to give him ability to get the form of the being he kill, devour, etc it will make thing interesting and will have a large story route ( taking different forms and controlling the situations all around the world).
hello author , I wants to know what will be the chapters update status and you will not drop this in the middle after 30 to 40 chapters right ? Now before you get offended by my question let me be clear, i just don't want to stay hanging on a halfway novel its very uncomfortable ( from experience ).