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i would have loved this more but you don't actually change anything in this novel all the story is original just Leon replaced rudeus does that even make a difference also leon isn't even a proper Reincarnated individual so no i don't like it

haha 😂 that is true it is difficult to write Lotm fanfic by the way i hope you can write one

this fanfic should have been the best their was but Alas you ruined it bcz of few things first This was supposed to be Ayanokouji's Fanfic but you wrote scenes of Rudeus then his and the philosophy of ayanokouji you misunderstood he doesn't like to get a peaceful life yes he likes this kind of life but he know when and where to do things Right for example you don't even make him progress in 4 years really a letdown

this story would have been a good if you don't ruined the whole thing for example if you just Reincarnated a person who watched Mushoku tensei in a side character and then make him a little bit talented so that he can advance while he saves everyone also you could have made him a person who made redius a capable person the nightmare dungeon would have been his main point from where he became saint grade in all aspects you could have gone a lot more simpler but efficient way to make story progress but you ruined it sorry bro i Think its 4/10

i hope you continue this fanfic its very good and also your use of three cowardly pathways is fantastic 😍 love it and by the way bcz of not reading Tower of God this is whole new level of enjoyment for me ..... ....... i have a suggestion for you to write a new fanfic on LOTM .. i my self am not good at English so i don't dare to write a novel i hope you can write a fanfic based on these points ..... .. (1)make a wish fulfilment story about a mc who has read Lotm and other novels also make it seem like he was a quite accomplished man in his first life i think give him wishes like ... ...first wish he will have a modified pathways consisting of three pathways i hope you make him of three cowardly pathways bcz they are quite a combination also involve a extra characteristic of three pathways including read made potion so he just need ritual and acting methods ... (2)Give him a modified and extra made sefirah castle which includes benefit of him not getting corruption from outer deities it will protect him All the time from Outer deities but it will not protect him from will of celestial worthy and original creator so that mc may not look like a completely overpowered also it can hide him from 7 orthodox gods and our truly dangerous brothers Amon and Adam .. .... (3)Give the power to actually create a duplicate copy of any pathways characteristic or any beyonder artefacts but it will have limitations like he can create only 5 copies of any pathways characteristic also it will heavily depends on his sequence like he can make copies of sequence 8 characteristic when his S9 also this limitations will have to be Abide by until he reaches the level of a piller this ability will give him a chance to make his subordinates Also it will not disturb our Mr.fool pathway or his journey in any way And lastly make him transmigrate Some years before so that when Klein is transmigrates our mc will be 17 year old also plz try to make him Reincarnate from baby so that he will study very well and will make a name for himself and also earn money 🤑 A lot on his own not daddy money ..... ......... plz sir

it is such a simple thing but you just have to make is more complicated really man mc transmigrate into a body and has a most powerful quirk and also he has a good brain but out of all things he has to do is to become a vigilante really as you all know how Mha world works and also its rules are quite strict but that dumbass mc has to do is do the opposite of all people really also he has no Awareness how to do his job silently its fucking dumb

that's why i hate this type of novels where Author forces plot on mc for example the plot of german joining phantom troupe or when he ventures into Dark continent he somehow takes mental pressure which in return enables negative traits like its so abnormal that it feels Unnatural Also if you Reincarnated an mc to other world at least give him a chance of developing his own abilities however you just had to preset abilities for mc really and then the booner is that mc doesn't feel to be getting stronger yes we can say that you just said that mc became stronger but that doesn't mean we feel the same vibe like he is actually getting stronger it feels so much wrong please improve you writing

Oh ok and by the way i have some suggestions for a fanfic when you write plz try to incorporate these and you will have a much more enjoyable read 1:-.. Don't give Mc everything like in this fanfic you gave him ability to create any skill or ability without limitations this Aspect makes a fanfic a less likeable to read even if mc puts restrictions on himself to not use an ability too much it will still look bad I think you should limit him to be able to create any ability once a day and also put a restriction that the ability or skill don't go 1 rank or 2 rank higher than the user and also make an exception of giving mc a chance to create a divine ability once a year so that he may not be a Canon fodder 2:-- try to restrict mc interactions with Original character make him an independent character like in this fanfic you put him in sunny's body its no so innovative Also a suggestion from a avid reader don't ever give fanfic mc a loving relationship with main female lead in SS like Nephis is supposed to be a love interest of Sunny but their is none for cassie so try to make mc an original character 3::-- make so that you ability to update novel is good it will invite more readers 4::-- Plz give mc some dignity like don't make him a simp or simply a person who read novels in his past life bcz nobody loved him this scenario looks quite cliche. make him at least smart and well accomplished man in his first life or simply make him great character in First life for example Arthur from "tbate" who was a king from past life Also plz give mc a well mannered character so that he will not start lusting over every female character... ........ thanks for reading my useless renters also don't be offended by me i simply a keyboard warrior 🪖🪖

this story was going well enough for a fanfic but you just had to go deeper into the tapestry of fate .also by writing about what fate will do when it is being altered you know man it was supposed to be a fun read for SS fans but you are making it too compilicated

it was a good read until mc advanced to sequence 7 at this stage the whole idea of acting and digestion was thrown out of the window also it took too long to advance next step it doesn't even compare to klein who at least advance in every two hundred chapters it good read but in later stages you ruined it