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Damn, so I have a mana core level 8? SA has its perks sometimes folks.

it’s pretty interesting so far :3 i’m excited to see where it goes

lol legalized theft- that’s how i feel buying anything these days 😭😭

ahh i’ve only seen it used as consulate nvm it just felt weird

consolations maybe? consolates isn’t a word😭

I really liked the descriptions here maybe i’m just getting used to the writing style but this monologue was well done 😌

Nah I agree with you. There’s a difference between quality writing that includes immersive language and writing that drags on lost in unnecessary comparisons/details. I’m pushing through because the story seems interesting and it’s not like the writing is technically of poor quality, but I wish some descriptions were on the simpler side. Plus with all the convoluted language constantly being used there’s less immersion with the character’s emotions.

I’m gonna try your novel for the sole reason that you keep using dean winchester gifs and i love u for it.