Hello, Hello, Can you see me~ get the reference? I am peachpen , a new budding writer with lots of nonsense ideas
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Im sorry but i absolutely hate Nico right now. i just can't like him. if he keeps this up, I'll have to drop this book
Oh I did alright I read at least seven chapters more. And yes. your style changed a lot. i loved how you changed it 180° . Yearning for him and the best chapter were very well done. I Have yet to read some more. Glad you got rid of the still writing style. it can potentially harm the beautiful plot you have going on.
I mean I am faring quite well thanks to me being a writer myself but i must admit that the author is likely turning off many people by the use of so many powerful words . i suggest using daily, conversational speaking style for the dialogues but well, it's the authors's choice isn't it ?
Wait. I thought Elijah was the Beta as said in Chapter 2. You only said that Olivia was an assistant . And now suddenly She is the Beta and Elijah is an Omega? I'm guessing you didn't read back on the previous chapter 😲
No hate honestly but your writing style seems quite....empty. like the comment above it just feels as if you're using fancy words for making it of value but it's not really doing anything . Even though they're placed in the right context, the story is still very rigid and not flowing .
Hi, don't mind me! I'm the shameless Author who has to do this to support her book. What can I say? they're my babies! Please do read this book and express your thoughts in the comments Would love to hear from the readers and receive constructive criticism.[img=recommend][img=recommend]