Arip_Purnomo

An adventurous story. I can't imagine the extent of his ideas and imagination to create this book. Well done, keep going!

cheer up🤧

Selection of language that is easy to understand. This is very enjoyable for me who is still learning English, keep updating more and more.

The title caught my attention, I read her writing neatly and she chose such a fresh idea. I like

I can't imagine how I woke up without a nose? Maybe I'm in the afterlife😭Unique stories with all the ideas, rich spirit

This fantasy novel from the synopsis alone is already exciting, keep writing and there must be many readers who can't wait for the chapters.

There are some parts that need to be improved, keep up the spirit of learning. Pretty good story, continue the struggle to write.

I love watching Korean movies, reading this novel can make me smile to myself. Because I can imagine Yi San who is handsome in the style of Korean princes.

The idea of this story is interesting, it would be better if at the end of the chapter to make a hanging word that makes the reader curious.

Well it turns out I'm the first person to give a review. The writing is neat, the idea is quite impressive and for the update time please improve again. Keep fighting