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Liefy

Liefy

Lv3

Passionate duelist.

2023-08-11 BeigetretenGlobal
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  • Liefy
    Liefy15d
    Antwortet auf Just_Lucid

    hes a wise lil apple

    If the two were not killed I could have been in danger. Mar Hast did nothing wrong.
    The Holy Apple
    Fantasie · Liefy
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  • Liefy
    Liefy15d
    Antwortet auf Just_Lucid

    bro took talking to himself in another level

    I remember, in most of the stories of old man, the King, or his son, who is called a prince, would often go out of their way to make their appearance in the scene rather dramatic and memorable. It makes their subject more inclined to love and obey their ruler.
    The Holy Apple
    Fantasie · Liefy
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  • Liefy
    Liefy15d
    Antwortet auf Just_Lucid

    oh...

        When I first opened my eyes, there was only the corpse of my old man ahead of me.
    The Holy Apple
    Fantasie · Liefy
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  • Liefy
    Liefy15d
    Antwortet auf Just_Lucid

    mar hast has been alive for a long time. bro probably knows how to differentiate between different types of powers

    "Yes your Majesty. They are two humans of the assassin class. Hearing the rumour of your rebirth, they were sent to check your condition. I have killed them before they could do anything."
    The Holy Apple
    Fantasie · Liefy
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  • Liefy
    Liefy16d
    Kommentiert

    good first chapter, but you should focus on grammer, there were no full stops or space in many places will be waiting for the next! :)

    Ch 1 T.N.D.
    PREY: T.N.D
    sci-fi · Israfilrahman
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  • Liefy
    Liefy4mth
    Kommentiert

    decent chapter

    Ch 3 Back off
    Note 0001
    Fantasie · 10001000
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  • Liefy
    Liefy4mth
    Kommentiert

    nah zain's literally me fr

    Ch 2 Appearance
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    Fantasie · 10001000
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  • Liefy
    Liefy4mth
    Kommentiert

    ....now the kid will never be "left alone" again!

    At one point in time when he was younger, he fought a kid and "made him all right." You didn't read wrong– the kid lost his left hand in the fight and became all right.
    Note 0001
    Fantasie · 10001000
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  • Liefy
    Liefy4mth
    Kommentiert

    where is he saying this? why no description :(

    "My dear subjects, please, I have one favor to ask of you.
    Note 0001
    Fantasie · 10001000
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  • Liefy
    Liefy4mth
    Kommentiert

    king... a hag?

    "Are you blaming me, old hag?" the mage continued. "Are you blaming me for your own stupidity?"
    Note 0001
    Fantasie · 10001000
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  • Liefy
    Liefy4mth
    Kommentiert

    thats quiet unbecoming of a kingly praise lol

    Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen.
    Note 0001
    Fantasie · 10001000
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  • Liefy
    Liefy4mth
    Kommentiert

    not bad

    Ch 1 Chapter 1 : The lost relic
    Shadow Of The Forgotten Blade
    Fantasie · Sparx_Gaming
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  • Liefy
    Liefy4mth
    Kommentiert

    and she just believed them just like that 💀

    One evening, while sipping a warm cup of spiced tea in a dimly lit tavern, Elena overheard a conversation between two cloaked figures. They spoke of a hidden map leading to the resting place of the Solstice Blade, deep within the Forbidden Forest. Intrigued and determined to uncover the truth, Elena decided to embark on this perilous quest.
    Shadow Of The Forgotten Blade
    Fantasie · Sparx_Gaming
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  • Liefy
    Liefy4mth
    Antwortet auf Sparx_Gaming

    oh sure ;)

    It has become way more precise and exact. I could see things far far away with almost an entirely clear view. Had I though, no reason to let my mates know of it yet. I assumed this was the skill the Face gave me.
    Sight: The Rise Of My Crystal Eyes
    Fantasie · Liefy
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  • Liefy
    Liefy4mth
    Kommentiert

    well sparx i guess u would reach this comment? if u r going to continue, i have dropped this novel with all confidence. i wont be writing the future chapters so uh yea (r u mercy tho)

    Ch 2 The Crystal Eyes
    Sight: The Rise Of My Crystal Eyes
    Fantasie · Liefy
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  • Liefy
    Liefy4mth
    Antwortet auf Sparx_Gaming

    nahh, slight romance

    "See, who said he wouldn't wake up?" smirked a black haired man in front of me. I liked his confident attitude, for some reason. And the other person there was a girl and both of them seemed to be of my age. While that wasn't the most lovable welcome for sure, I didn't say anything. 'So these two are the Heroes of my party?' I thought.
    Sight: The Rise Of My Crystal Eyes
    Fantasie · Liefy
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  • Liefy
    Liefy4mth
    Antwortet auf Liefy

    and for that reason, u should know how much sung had to depend on his own strength instead of his army at times, bro here is considering all possibilities

    The face was reading my mind, creepy. But can't help it. Necromancers are portrayed as so dope in novels, but now that I think about it, they require absurd luck at times. You know, say this spellcaster started a cyclone, my whole skeleton army will be dead in moments, of course I would have more powerful units. Maybe dragons, uh... Golems? What are strong units? But you see, when you fight the 'bosses', these units get sweeped. At least that's the conclusion I reached after finishing my 5th necromancer based isekai novel.
    Sight: The Rise Of My Crystal Eyes
    Fantasie · Liefy
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  • Liefy
    Liefy4mth
    Antwortet auf Sparx_Gaming

    i did, actually

    The face was reading my mind, creepy. But can't help it. Necromancers are portrayed as so dope in novels, but now that I think about it, they require absurd luck at times. You know, say this spellcaster started a cyclone, my whole skeleton army will be dead in moments, of course I would have more powerful units. Maybe dragons, uh... Golems? What are strong units? But you see, when you fight the 'bosses', these units get sweeped. At least that's the conclusion I reached after finishing my 5th necromancer based isekai novel.
    Sight: The Rise Of My Crystal Eyes
    Fantasie · Liefy
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  • Liefy
    Liefy4mth
    Antwortet auf Sparx_Gaming

    of course 📯

    "The 'Wish', is the Grand reward for the Hero's Team each of the surviving Hero of the team shall receive this. That is, One, and any of your wish. Shall be fulfilled. Be it immortality, The Heaven, or Powers unimaginable. Hero, get excited,"
    Sight: The Rise Of My Crystal Eyes
    Fantasie · Liefy
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  • Liefy
    Liefy4mth
    Antwortet auf Sparx_Gaming

    which one is mercy lol

    Ch 1 The Beginning
    Sight: The Rise Of My Crystal Eyes
    Fantasie · Liefy
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