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Wasn’t so sure I the first few chapters, and some of the relationships from before the story left me wanting. But after a couple chapters it catches interest all the same.

I thought politically atleast these countries are more aligned with ww1, but if this is throwing me off, since Poland was a part of the old commonwealth which I think was eaten by Austria-Hungary. I guess this alt history has been a little mix of the ages.

I know this is a old comment but I think all of these are at a length where a 20% coup would make them 1 fp.

Nice idea, sad it’s probably dropped, passionate kiss was too quick but that’s minor

I think there is a Chinese saying for an easy shoot but also a Buddhist saying very similar to the cave allegory, either works in a way.

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Beginning has more hooks than I’d like, but writing was good and intriguing beginning.

Good start, the whole Mombie joke made me wonder about her mentality, but I guess that is something she is trying to address bout herself.

Cute, slightly sickly romance, the very first chapter she hadn’t warned ML a new skill, I’m wondering whether it really emphasizes there lack of communication, or just for a funny moment. I want to know more about the world and system, but overall looking good.

Real tell not show