Renz_007

Well I enjoyed the beginning of the story Because of comedy but the I'm getting sick of the comedy and to top it off with not so good romance. Overall it's good for new readers But I suggest if you're going to write again you should consider how the character interact with each other so they don't feel like forced(like when the comedy is not necessary in interaction but you still add it) only add comedy to lighten the feelings of readers don't add to much About the romance I guess same as the comedy problem but you shouldn't spoil who the fl and also if you're writing a romance give it something (which I don't know how to explain this) but for reference try to read shadow slave or any good novel with good romance try to get inspiration on them so the romance won't feel weird But like I said it's good just try to make it better

Tbh I like the story for 100+ chapters but when it comes to romance I feel that it's forced Not only that the mc ability(law of truth) is pretty interesting but it's not very detailed(for example the concept of other law it's only explanation this is law is for that it's use is for that) what I'm trying to say is I feel like there always missing(maybe it's because of how easy it sounds for the mc to acquire a law he just need to sit in front of the fire and he can get heavenly law of fire) there is no enlightenment just some mc going here and there to acquire some strong law that's why I always feel something is missing Ps;I have a lot to say but I'm having a hard time in English if you understand what I'm trying to say thank you if you don't please don't mock me

The mc act like some sort of hero of justice(but he's reckless and dumb) and the mc has a habit of picking up some lost pets(I mean the cultivator with no connection to him for example: some guy from sharpoon immortal ruins and some nun disciple) what's annoying is the mc has no brain he always like to offend someone stronger than him and he like to rescue others even when he is a weakling The plot armor on this novel is thick Ps: if you have read a good novel like RI,ISSTH,LOTM and etc don't read this novel it's a waste of time

There's no character development for the mc the mc just sit on his wheel chair(when he can walk) and becoming stronger and the story is focused on other characters

I also try to read it a second time but I realized compared to other lord novel this novel clearly exist just for the sake of mc Monster's and lords that coincidentally drop resources Mc talent coincidentally a legendary tier 100% drop rate Talents that drop or merge exactly to what mc needed for example the ranch or the alchemy And another things this novel don't have the concept of mining minerals, mining stone and Chopping woods for resources Everything Is already coincidentally prepared because for mc

This story has a lot of potential compared to other lord novels it's just shame the level of gods is just 30 and the story still has a lot to explore............... . .l . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

I mean novel main character are supposed to be the best among characters not the whole story is created just for them because if that's the case there will be no development

Actually when I first read this novel I quite like it but when I read other novels with similar concept and I reread it a second time it feel shit because I realized this novel is not worth reading the main character is fine but compared to novel with same concept this novel feels like it's created for the mc just think about it in normal lord concept novel the main character always try to gather resources I mean by literally mining mines collecting herbs and etc But this mc just coincidentally aquire a talent that grant him 100% drop rate not only that every monster's and lords loot coincidentally has meat,water, recruitment and talent Don't bother reading this it's good when you are newbie in this lord concept but when you read other novel with the similar concept you will realize that this novel is shit

I forgot to add but reverend insanity is interesting not just because the characters but because reverend insanity is a novel that contains meaning,insight and etc about life and by reading the book you can feel like you're watching the main character how he live,how he grows,how he fail and how he succeed such novel has a lot of emotion and insight. it is one of the best novel.👑👑👑

I just want to say in case you don't understand but fangyuan is not obsessed with eternal life and it is not his dream, eternal life is just a goal in his life. so please don't just write a random goal when you are creating a character please try understand the goal that you're giving in the character like how you are giving yourself a goal give it emotion,reason and meaning so the story would be interesting and entertaining. And I'm sorry if you are offended but I don't mean anything bad😔 I just like it when the story has meaning not some other novel where the author will just give some super cheat and harem into the mc without a reason or meaning and I find those novel disappointing so I'm sorry