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Im curious, i haven't read invincible and i only watched a few episodes, is this following the the same time line as those? Or are events happening at different times then in cannon?

I do wonder how hes gonna get out of this one

Thanks for chapter

Well since you asked so nicely, here, take my power stones

Rockwell's character feels so real and the conversation he has with the shadow is heartwarming

Im currently reading the first chapter and let me tell you, the details and descriptions are phenomenal at setting the tone And the personality of the two characters is very well made, i haven't finished reading and i am left wanting more already All in all great job

I honestly was willing to look past the possible harem in the future but there's some edgy stuff in here I'm not particularly found of The story was good in the first chapters but it goes down hill from that, it's almost like it's a different person writing it, not only that, there's no stakes in the story anymore and you made an osmosian even more op And again, the EDGY stuff, not a big fan of that

The story seems good so far, looking forward for more I specially like the limitations on hes powers, sure he can probably get better at it in the future but still Secondly i like how you have handled hes powers so far Great story, man

I think it would also be interesting to see things like the protagonist saving people that would originally die and beneficial things like that which you're already doing But also: some times the changes he makes to history may have a negative outcome, such as enemies being stronger, working together, new threats that weren't there originally, people who weren't supposed to die dying and so on

Ok so hear me out, i saw this idea few years ago about an alternative universe where ben and ghost freak team up and instead of escaping the omnitrix he helps ben giving him advice and what not There was also the concept of Ben's aliens being somewhat empowered by ectonurite dna