DisenchantedReader

The writing quality is good and it easy to fall into the world. That’s probably why the disappointment is 1000x worse than normal. I want to say it’s the same old generic school villain reincarnation trope but somehow the author managed to make it even worse. The MC is a dogshit human being that you actually cheer against (wish Locke had caved his face in). He is basically the quiet kid in class that serves no purpose in anyone’s life. Only a matter of time till he takes out his family and then heads to a elementary school. He is self righteous, out of touch with anything that might make him human, and just a horrible person all around. I never bullied anyone consistently when I was in school but I think I would beat this MC anytime I saw him even after graduation. That’s how unlikable he is. Cant even focus on the story itself since I’m busy looking for chapters that don’t have him in it.

That’s where I went after the service. Use to be able to swing a 16lb hammer for 12 hours. Messed around and became a PM a decade ago and I’m soft af now. Get yelled at or grieved if I touch a tool 🥺

He is saying his inborn talent is average without the system.

Stupid, should have told her about the feedback, they would push even more resources to him. Guess the scrubs won’t accept an Mc that doesn’t go through the struggle 🙄🙄

You are a tool for human survival. The only way you can be bullied by a young master is if you don’t let anyone know your abilities. People without abilities are dead weight and have no value, that’s why they get bullied 🤷‍♂️

Hope we don’t have a lazy writer who likes to start at the bottom for cheap drama.

That’s what ugly guys say. No matter how miserable a handsome guy is, he can always look at himself and find a reason to smile and rebuild. When you are ugly I imagine it’s a lot harder 😂

Classic side chr behavior, they talk a lot when they pretend to be an MC.

New the novel was going to be trash as soon as I saw the MC’s name, the only thing more pathetic than a Chinese MC is a Japanese one. I understand why Indians refer to India as the sub-continent, I wouldn’t want to be called Asian either 😂😂

He just had a goal and now you nerf him, wtf author, get your shit together. You should try writing like you don’t know anything about your own character because that is how we the readers currently are. Right now it feels like you have an end goal for this story but you have no idea how to get there and your just fumbling around until someone tells you what to do. Talked myself out of even trying 😂 wish you luck with coming up with a decent character for what appears to be a great story idea. ✌🏻