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Zero_Reason

Lv3
2023-07-30 BeigetretenUnited Kingdom
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  • Zero_Reason4 months ago
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    Great story, has a really interesting concept. but needs work on the writings structure, it is a bit all over the place at times and can make it annoying to read. (constantly switching the prospective, different fonts and and inconsistent structure of the paragraphs) Overall enjoyable to read and can't wait for more chapters, keep up the good work.