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People's tastes may differ across different genres, but when it comes to writing quality, it's a skill issue if you can't see it, not taste. I'm not even shaming the story itself, even if it's a cliche that's been written thousands of times by other mediocre writers. My critique is purely focused on the quality of the writing.

coi is not canon! COI IS NOT CANON!! coi is not canon! COI IS NOT CANON!! coi is not canon! COI IS NOT CANON!! coi is not canon! COI IS NOT CANON!!

My friend, if you like this *webnovel* even in the slightest bit, I am sorry, but you are the one with no taste. I can even guess that most fans of this novel are probably below 17 or 18.

I find the rating normal, this site is full of abysmal 'webnovels' that has high ratings.

i did not give advice, i just gave the cold hard facts.

I would probably feel much more comfortable, being honest with authors who have terrible writing skills, i think honesty is the most important thing especially if you are an author, because without it you can't improve. It's like the mother who says to her ugly kids that they are beautiful and handsome, etc. .

should i recommend webnovels or published books?

read more books...

Kudos to the author. He knows exactly how to attract a teenage- low iq audience. Author is basically printing money since antartica arc as his loyal brainless readers will pay for any garbage he churns out and call it 'miraculous writing. What a drag.

Webnovel has one job and they are unbelievably failing miserably, what's with this horrendous mtl translation, seriously? It was fine because they were at least ''kind'' enough to edit the grammar mistakes but in the latest chapters, its straight up mtl without even editing. Just go read deathblade's translation guys, this shit does not deserve your money, trust me.