Pillars_of_Sand

The clip simply holds the bullets when outside the gun to be manually loaded into the guns internal magazine old tech. Now most models use detaching and swappable magazines. I hate to be this cringe but it just took me out of the moment. Everything else though great so far.

The Comments in this review are wild it convinced me to read the book

If steam boilers are so common place why is the water murky and hard to get just collect the steam and you have purified water

Why do they always make these chapters taking advantage of Auto Unlock users

This is dumb the amount of plot holes since the Chunin exams started are really stacking up

This is why I couldn’t join ravenclaw riddles are so hard

I don’t mind mind control but it just feels like it came out of no where like there would be a better way to approach girls. Like ask her out on a date and make a move to kiss after some drinking or something. Or run into her in the dungeon and have one of them slip and fall on each other or have them find eachother solo and hunt together and she goes into heat or something.

Considering dropping, repeated lines, mis gendering, bad grammar, it breaks me out of the story I’ll keep going for a couple chaps to see if it improves

It seems like there are more important things than getting a healthcare check up right now and whether he should even trust goblin doctors especially ones in charge of managing the last heir to a families massive wealth I know author can protect him with the the power of story telling but please think before you do this in real life guys.

Glad that dill weed didn’t get saved also just hate Rei in general IMO I’d leave Rei on the roof and hang with my bro takashi maybe hook him up with one of sloots from creepy sensei’s gang after I cap him. Seiko is the only girl I care about. Maybe the Nurse and red head too.