CrownClown666
I won't say life is beating my ass right now...but the b1tch got hands
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CrownClown6663dVerschicktThis novel is only good if you're not reading for the plot and looking only for face slapping. I've read 100 chapters so far and the novel is the same as any cultivation novel, except that the world is modernized. So basically a replica of novels such as My Wife is a Beautiful CEO as well as Beauty and the Bodyguard (both of which are shit 💩). To make it worse, every time the mc shows his status and power, big families and specifically his fiancée seems to have dementia as they forget all of that after a chapter is over. Overall, this novel offers terrible writing and story telling whose audience is hot headed teens (literally I don't know who else can enjoy this for more than 100 chapters). *This is a review from a website in which this novel is free to read. It's something with which I agree with 100%, seeing as I also wasted 100+ chapters on this 💩. I posted it here so that those that are thinking of investing their time on it know what they would be getting themselves into. * It's author's like this ones that lock chapters within 8ch or less, that make me glad for websites that pirate their stuff.
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why? it's just the name of a person she just met. Would've been different if it was someone truly notorious. He's not Baba Yaga.
Just his name itself made Amy's hands tremble. - CrownClown6665dKommentiert
so he's just giving out his alias whenever any one asks him who he is? For a Fake Leader of a powerful organization, he's not really trying to hide his mysterious persona.
"Moriarty." - CrownClown6665dKommentiert
he's probably gonna go throw up...
After closing his system, he took a good look at the Wraith's dead body before deciding to leave. - CrownClown6665dKommentiert
Didn't he already have 3 white dots put into int? why did it appear as if he never spent anything on it?
∟ INT: F+ [●●●○○] - CrownClown6665dKommentiert
sigh.. this kid...
"Die, die, die, die, die, die, die, die, die!" - CrownClown6665dKommentiert
Come on man, just put your big boy pants on and do it. kill it.
But the sheer act of killing made him conflicted. - CrownClown6665dAntwortet auf juSTAbystandR
dj khaled, only person to hire ppl with fewer brain cells than his.
With that, the two left with Alpha, heading towards wherever the guards' bathroom was. - CrownClown6665dKommentiert"Urmm… Fine, we don't want you shitting all over this place."
- CrownClown6665dKommentiert"It's a bit urgent, and I'm not sure how far it is. Would both of you mind showing me to the bathroom just in case?"
- CrownClown6665dAntwortet auf Adi_Aditya_0464It was, and the fact that Brandon Locke had a system made Brandon even more suspicious.
- CrownClown6665dAntwortet auf lfinnlHe had the system, something that the main protagonist had.
- CrownClown6665dAntwortet auf noarenamesleftHe had the system, something that the main protagonist had.
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wasn't this supposed to be three white dots???
∟ INT: F+ [○○○○○] - CrownClown6665dKommentiertJust getting the attention of a beautiful girl like Rachel was enough to make him falter.
- CrownClown6665dKommentiertHe couldn't help it, he was a teenage boy with zero romantic experience.