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I0_0shouldntbehere2mthKommentiertthx for the chapter
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thx for the chapter
Dieses Buch wurde gelöscht. - I0_0shouldntbehere2mthKommentiertCh 76 A Quick Finish (2)
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You have to be third wheel. Where is Bazz I thought Bazz was his best friend.
"No. You're going with me." Jan said while gripping my wrist tightly. - I0_0shouldntbehere2mthKommentiert
Why?
His hand reached out, not a cocky command, but a hesitant offering. "Can't we be friends?" - I0_0shouldntbehere2mthKommentiert
Good job
Me? I just stood there a silent observer caught in the beauty written from the depths of my novel. - I0_0shouldntbehere2mthKommentiert
He beat you
Bazz chuckled again. "True enough. And speaking of sloppy,I caught a glimpse of him during the matches, let's just say there was zero finesse." - I0_0shouldntbehere2mthKommentiert
Wow look at her reasoning. Now I wanna punch her.
"Now, to repay your debt... you'll be my assistant for costing me a month's salary on a stupid bet!" She shrugged, a smug grin plastered on her face. Me? Not exactly thrilled. - I0_0shouldntbehere2mthKommentiert
What you doing man
"But you don't have to, because after all, you're strong, and I believe in you." - I0_0shouldntbehere2mthKommentiert
Does nobody knows his full name? Shouldn't his full name be written on results
1st - Rel Laurence: 50/50 - I0_0shouldntbehere2mthKommentiert
cuz I am the hero
"I can't let them down," I muttered to myself. "I need to save them." - I0_0shouldntbehere2mthKommentiert
dent in head?
Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen. - I0_0shouldntbehere2mthKommentiert
You know author you have already said that 'end' is different from the what we think. it's a mystery or whatever that's why you are not using the word ending but I personally think there is no need to to emphasize it every single time. you can simply write end instead of 'end'. OR og ISKE could have also said that 'It's only you who can change 'that'. I think you are overusing 'end'. Since you have already used it enough time there is no need to emphasize again and again. Try your best so that readers can forget it and when it slips their minds then bang unveil the mystery like it was always there in the hindsight but we couldn't see. That's just my humble opinion. You know better than me.
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Why not?
Yo, I'm just gonna drop some of my notes here. I phrased it so you can enjoy it if you want to read through it. Tell me if you guys want a character sheet, it'll be a pain to write but eh... you guys have rights. - I0_0shouldntbehere2mthKommentiert
Still it doesn't justify innocent killing
She knew many of them were innocent and were loyal to the Duchy, but when the choice was between her son's life and some stranger's - she chose her son without a second thought or any guilt. - I0_0shouldntbehere2mthAntwortet auf Vishnu_vm
And she will just go Kaboom
"Me? I am Rio Flash, a swordsman and Lia's boyfriend." (Rio) - I0_0shouldntbehere2mthKommentiert
I think that's a lot of stuttering.
"S-so, h-how do-does this l-look on me, its n-not like y-your opinion matters, bu-but I am ju-just asking..." (Lia) - I0_0shouldntbehere2mthKommentiert
? she has a crush on you? 😅
"Where are you going! Come with me I want to visit that bar!" (Lia) - I0_0shouldntbehere2mthKommentiert
I Know she is just 15 lol. She is like my sister in bragging who can control kids 😂😂
"Not to mention I have already transferred enough money to your bank account, anyway I have a huge amount of money it doesn't matter if I threw away some of it in the garbage, humph." (Lia) - I0_0shouldntbehere2mthKommentiert'See I told you, this young master is too good!'