Danespl

Lv3

A failed writer. I might have just wrote the worst books under this account.

2023-07-11 BeigetretenUnited States

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Danespl21 hours ago
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An academy? yay!
The city of Ironhaven, situated in the western side of Mugen continent, stretching for about 1,223.59 square kilometers (472.43 square miles) in total area. This includes 778.18 square kilometers (300.46 square miles) of land and 445.41 square kilometers (171.97 square miles) of water. The city was divided into two sections: the opulent Upper district where the wealthy elite resided in grand, embroidered buildings built with bricks, filled with various and completed machinerys, lush gardens and the Range Academy of awakeneds, where all young teenagers are admitted to three days after clocking the age of sixteen and taught heavily to prepare for the impending war as the first war had ended thanks to the first set of awakened humans who had managed to push back this unknown race of monsters, striving to colonize humanity. Since then, there whereabouts have been shrouded in mystery but rumoured to be outside the citadel's of Ironhaven city, that were built to hold off this race.
Strange Lord
Fantasie · DoomCelestial
Danespl21 hours ago
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No! Maths, I hate it, Km Km km
The city of Ironhaven, situated in the western side of Mugen continent, stretching for about 1,223.59 square kilometers (472.43 square miles) in total area. This includes 778.18 square kilometers (300.46 square miles) of land and 445.41 square kilometers (171.97 square miles) of water. The city was divided into two sections: the opulent Upper district where the wealthy elite resided in grand, embroidered buildings built with bricks, filled with various and completed machinerys, lush gardens and the Range Academy of awakeneds, where all young teenagers are admitted to three days after clocking the age of sixteen and taught heavily to prepare for the impending war as the first war had ended thanks to the first set of awakened humans who had managed to push back this unknown race of monsters, striving to colonize humanity. Since then, there whereabouts have been shrouded in mystery but rumoured to be outside the citadel's of Ironhaven city, that were built to hold off this race.
Strange Lord
Fantasie · DoomCelestial
Danespl21 hours ago
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Writing is lit, well written
The wall clock ticked by each second that passed as he slid his fingers through his tousled hair. He then tilted his head towards the window. Outside, he could hear the clank of city life beginning to awake.
Strange Lord
Fantasie · DoomCelestial
Danespl21 hours ago
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But he gat gas lamps, see I ain't that smart so don't blame me when Im commenting on every single paragraph
On the walls, gas lamps flickered, brightening the room with a warm, crimson glow over the room, their glass covers were slightly tarnished but still functional.
Strange Lord
Fantasie · DoomCelestial
Danespl21 hours ago
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Darn, is he that broke?
He swung his legs over the side of the bed; a makeshift of old springs and patched fabric, pushed against a wall cluttered with junks. His bare feet met the cold gritted wooden floor. Dust motes floated briefly in the beam of light before setting on the myriad of unkempt items strewn about.
Strange Lord
Fantasie · DoomCelestial
Danespl21 hours ago
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Man, this is serious study you did before writing this.
In the corner of his room stood a workbench, a chaotic mass of discarded junk gears, cracked glass tubes, and copper contraptions, a brass clock - its face was cracked and decorated with filigree, chiming softly as time moved by.
Strange Lord
Fantasie · DoomCelestial
Danespl21 hours ago
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I knew that was a dream, you freak head
Another dream of mother... The oversized teenager, Griffin, sighed as he stared at the ceiling above.
Strange Lord
Fantasie · DoomCelestial
Danespl21 hours ago
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You gat luck
He blinked, trying to shake off the rememants of sleep. The air was thick with the scents of oil and metal, punctuated by the faint tang of coal smoke escaping in from outside. Above him, a network of rusty gas pipes twisted across the ceiling, their surfaces peppered with seams and rivets.
Strange Lord
Fantasie · DoomCelestial
Danespl21 hours ago
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Steampunk setting, yay, long descriptions yay
As the first ray of morning sunlight filtered through the rusty pine window, a young teenager stirred awake. His eyelids fluttered open, revealing dark-brownish pupils in both eyes with huge dark circles under his eyelids.
Strange Lord
Fantasie · DoomCelestial
Danespl21 hours ago
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Dreams Lie, trust me.
"Don't cry, you will meet me one day if you can stay strong till then. Goodbye, my little Griffin.." Vanishing slowly into thin air, Griffin's mother said with a smile.
Strange Lord
Fantasie · DoomCelestial

Dragon Online

dropped!

Danespl · Fantasie

Blood Monarch System

Dropped!

Danespl · Fantasie

New novel!

Lord of Doom!Reincarnated into a novel as a side character