dimcollegewriter
I write these. Feedback would be appreciated. (Cover art by me)
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Yeah, I'll review my story. These ratings are much the real value of this short draft than their relative importance towards each other. I think the plot evolves in satisfactory manner; albeit a tad too quickly, perhaps. I also like the idea behind the twins. They were planned to be devil - like entities, but ended up being rather open-ended characters that you can interpret as you wish. Overall, I enjoyed writing this. I didn't revisit it much, though.