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That's his secret to tell. Don't wanna be a snitch 😂 But yeah! He's not!
That's his secret to tell. Don't wanna be a snitch 🤣 But yeah, he's not!
Writing quality, dope! Update stability, well, it's still too early to judge but, so far, it's consistent. About the character design, not gonna lie, I read only chapter one so far and its hard to tell since it's a dream. But I think he'll be dope if he comes out to be like how he acted in this nightmare. Keep it up, author! I'll update this review according to how the story will grows.
I actually liked the plot twist at the end. Keep it up!
Such an intriguing first chapter and storyline! Keep it coming, author! Would like to read more of this book... and highly recommend it to anyone who's into dark things.
Because he's a snitch by blood🤣
Yeah! She still doesn't trust him. When she does, you'll see how submissive she can become.
Yeah! She was alive. However, not physical. She had lost her physical form so she could hide from the gods during the war. Plus, we still don't know if she loved God of Desires.
I also read it like that when I was editing. Btw, thanks for the vote!
He will of course come back and do that.
Oh! Poor me! I thought it was something I needed to correct. I mean, I literally reread the whole chapter asking myself, where's it? 😂 Glad to hear it was just a comment for fun. Thank you!
I don't understand. I mean, I'm not seeing where this is written so I can correct it.
Thank you!
Speechless!
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Thank you so much! My keyboard just loves what whenever I try to write want. It gives me a headache when I'm editing.
I used outburst to mean 'a sudden release of strong emotion.'