DaoistWsow5U

I also suggest. That you. Stop writing Like this. Not every sentence, Or expression, Needs to be Its own paragraph. It looks horrible! Doesn’t read well. And ruins the experience. It’s super annoying

I skipped like 50% of the starwars story line and I gotta say it’s still pretty obvious ai. Like why is each sentence nomatter how long in its own paragraph?

Sadly I don’t like invincible fics. But thanks for the suggestion

Pretty much yeah

Jesus wtf nah wtf wtf! 20 fing chapters??????? Just explaining the system????? Thank god for this comment

So so to be honest. The idea is good but goes down the drain pretty quick. Mc is an idiot, tobirama has to constantly be correcting him. The pacing is very bad and honestly waaaaaaaaaaaaay too many chapters in the starwars universe. Like the first 10 where fine and after getting the lightsaber one would think they go back but noooooo we have like 50 more chapters in it . So this is why I dropped it not because it was a bad story but because the author got lost in the plot and stayed waaaaaaaay to long in the other universe imo like there are barely any chapters in the ninjaverse and waaaaaay more in the starwars world. Also it’s very annoying that the characters know about the Mc powers like that’s the worst and most boring thrope there is

Nope not puffy

Something ain’t right

It’s fine I gues. But the pacing is god awful and so much ist just skipable. Sometimes is enough just to read the title of the chapter to know what happens in a chapter and you lan just skip it. Sadly I will have to drop this since we never actually follow the Mc around

This took waaaaaaaaaaaay to long I basically skipped this entire dungeon.