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creepy start gonna enjoy this
A good read , I am mostly into funny reads and this one is good to be added to library keep it up author. though I liked how funny the mc and scarlet convo are
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
I am deeply apologetic , I will try to do chapters as often as possible and as requested I have mentioned goals at the end of the chapter when reached I will do bonus chapters thank you for your patience
maybe in a few days, I will try writing fast
hello its any_sirel, its my first work so I am nervous though hope you like it. if you liked the work even a little bit I hope you will like it to the library and spare some power stones which will help me get more readers like yourself you can comment questions ,suggestions and thoughts on the comments below chapter or paragraph comment and I will get to them as soon as I can. thank you for reading...
world background , character design and story development has great potential, just need refining, edit and maybe some changes overall. keep it up.
thank you for pointing our I will put in some explanation where I can find suitable spot.
its a good piece its pace and story is good , its beginning is similar to one of the fairy tails I know but I like it, definitely worth a shot. waiting for next chapters.
story passing is slow though its not boring, character introduction is good. good character development , I am exited to see what's coming next.