Quite interesting. There were some silly mistakes but don't worry, you will overcome them gradually. Reread your writings again and again to find the mistakes. Don't stop writing and I am eager to see how your story unfolds. Best of luck!

I had fun reading it. Keep up the good work.

Thanks. I will try to change the description.

Thank you Sarah

Thanks Abrar ❄️🫧

Thank you. Wish me best of luck.

Loved it. I remember this book cover. Well best of luck! Keep writing. Writing quality is good....and the story has a promising future. I want to see how it goes.

first person pov...same as mine...best chapter

medium mana pill for free. free things always look good

yes here comes the skill

I liked the start

I look forward to your chapters. I love the way you describe your characters. Best of luck for you

I am not a fan of korean idols but I know the craze that goes on around this world. Nevertheless the transformation that the mc had is outstanding. not everyone can revert themselves to a good job after being a thug. I like the story, author. Best of luck

I liked the dark magic theme....it gave me goosebumps from the start. I loved your story. Best of luck!

Thanks a lot haven...Just thinking that someone is reading my writing with this much attention...trying to figure out every paragraph...it really does make me happy...You are the best reader!!!

I liked the story. And how you literally added an emoji to show the smirk, I was laughing hard. Unique one. Loved how you described the vam girl. Best of luck

Thanks a lot sir. It really means a lot

Thanks a lot :)

Just watch and read...there is a reason behind the name...let me not give you any spoiler :3

hey I tried to improve. How does it look now?