Edenscreenwriting

forced to rate this by my gf but this one rlly caught my attention than the other novels that the author made, can't wait for new chaps

more chapters so my girlfriend will be happy lol

Since my girlfriend told me to comment and review this story, I'd say the same thing as her that this novel really has the potential. I came from the other novel you wrote author, really enjoyed it and looking forward to their future adventures.

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Definitely gives some TOCF (I'm a fan of it me sorry) Vibes but your story has a lot of potential! I love how it's kind of fast-paced and slow-paced at the same time, The way you described the scenes are fricking another level dude. I wonder how will they react if they find out Lucians's identity (reminds me of my Cale Cale) if it ever happened, oh well. Solid five stars for you my dear author. 🤩

definitely got me crying onto the ground :(((

very great storyline i loved it!! good work author. [img=Feeling it]